I am Poem

          I am proud of my I am poem. I put in lots of information about me and punctuation so the reader can enjoy it. I did my personal best. I really tried putting in the descriptive words so the reader learns about me.   

                                         I am...

Success Criteria

Use a thesaurus to choose the best vocabulary

Choose the best nouns for the poem

Choose the best adjectives to describe some nouns

Leave the reader thinking about your poem by sharing what it inside you

I am an animal loving person  

I wonder if I will have a hotel one day

I hear my brother screaming

I see people working

I want a pet tiger

I am an animal loving person

I pretend I am a puppy playing.

I feel Sam jumping on my head.

I touch everything.

I worry that my brother will fall asleep at dinner.

I cry if I break my arm.

I am an animal loving person.

I understand some things sometimes

I say everything about puppy’s.

I dream of a candy land of puppies and tiger’s.

I try to be  brave like when I did skyswing and it was freaky and I was petrified but I was brave.

I hope that I will have a bird

I am a animal person

Volleyball reflection

Volleyball Reflection

Something that challenge me was volleyball and getting the ball over the net to defend my team and are team's named Parkvale Rockers. We vs Mahora lots it was so fun.

 Mahora was quite hard but a little easy at lest we win sometimes we had to have our hand's in a W to holed the ball and put our hand's together to set the ball and hit it over the net. If they hit it back over the net and the ball touch's the ground they get a point and if we hit it back and it touches the ground we get a point.
I'm proud of hitting the ball the right way and not the opposite way because the first few times I hit it the opposite way.

I'm going to volleyball again because I want to get better.        

Camp Omatua

                                 

The mummies were so funny and amazing. We dressed them up with toilet paper. We got scared when it was Martins turn and he ripped his costume and was running and roaring                             and scaring people. I thought Mrs Ramsay was the funniest. After they did a funny dance they were throwing toilet paper.  

                                                                                                                               

Look at Terenzo's funny face.

We all made yum dinners and breakfasts.

          

The pool's were my favorite bit out of everything because everyone had fun and the slides were amazing.

Something that challenged me was eating in the fear factor because I didn't want to do it but I had to. Mrs H said it was insects a slimy slug and it was alive and it could crawl up my throat I believed it.

                                               

Everyone had fun on Camp Omatua. My favorite thing was the tubing in the river.                                                                                                      

My favorite book

My name is Emily and I'm learning to managing my own self and doing my favorite book and putting in information.
We have been trying to convince others to read our favorite books.                      
I am proud of my learning because it challenged me and I put lot's of effort.

                                                                                                                                                                                                      

Puppy presentation

       

This puppy presentation took me lots of time and it is my personal best.
My teachers gave me a lot of feedback that I listened to.
I am proud of my work because I sowed interrogatory and perseverance.     
Something that challenged me was putting in information. 
I showed PRIDE.            

Accident

Camp Chant